The Quote -

"Nope, I don't really have anything new to say. but then, I always have something amazing to tell about things that you already know!!"

-Muthu

Thursday, June 25, 2009

A few single lilies - A poem

The Snap-



The Poem-


A few single lilies - lost in her locks


Sparkled; laughed with delight;
Sparked; broke a few rays of light;

Scattered a few rainbows
Splattered were a skew of Spectra-

Of the seven colors known &
Of a dozen few unknown-



A few single lilies - lost in her locks

Danced along with the rhythm of the wind;
Salsa & Tango; with a bit of
foxtrot thrown in.

Waltz & quickstep;
Zinging it up with-
the east coast swing.



A few single lilies- lost in her locks

were blessed & kissed

And as stars they were christened.

Their laughter & twinkle immortalized.


In curves of her hair;
swaying with the breeze-
playing in the bliss
of eternal despair;

Her flowing hair-
Her beauty's lair;

As dark as the night's sky can never be-
As dense as love will ever always be-



A few single lilies - lost in her locks
......

48 comments:

Vinnie said...

bloody beautiful...lingering freshness!
dude, u r ready for 'http://readwritepoem.org/' do visit here n find petically talented ppl like u...i am poetically-challenged n cant critique beyond - beautiful,etc !

Sowmi said...

AWESOME....superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb after a long time am visiting your blog and am in love with this post...

Aditi..............:) said...

Rehreshing and beautiful!! :) Btw you should take Vinnie's advice! :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

it was top class muthu. i so loved it. amazing it was :)

AD said...

your take is refreshing and rejuvenating :)
thank you for sharin!

LazyKing said...

beautiful and very delightful

muthu said...

@ Vinnie- Thanks 4 your compliments Vinnie...

am so happy my poem refreshed U. :)

& I will sure visit the site. :)

muthu said...

@ sowmi- am so glad U liked my poem. :)

muthu said...

@ Aditi- Thanks.. Sure.. Will do. :)

muthu said...

@ Preetilata【ツ】 -- :):) thanks 4 your compliments... :):)

Keep visiting.

muthu said...

@ AD- Am always happy to share... & am so happy to have rejuvenated U.. :)

muthu said...

@ Lazyking- Thanks 4 the compliments...

do keep visiting.. :)

Anirudh said...

Transports you to another place that's better and has that beautiful girl with the wind in her hair. Brilliant flow and varied degrees of meaning.Bravo!

Meera said...

wow, nice one!

:0)

priya said...

Shouldn't it be-
as dark as the night's sky can "ever" be?
Nice sweet poem :)

Marina said...

So...light and refreshing and, uh, PRETTY, really! I loved it! Like a breath of fresh air. =)

muthu said...

@ anirudh - thanks 4 ur compliments man.. :)

& yeah I too loved the gal with her hair flying in the pic.

muthu said...

@ Meera - Thanks.. :)

muthu said...

@ Priya - If I am gonna use "can ever be" then I am referring that the nights sky's best darkness is equal to the darkness of her hair but

I wanna mean--- her hair is so dark tat even the darkest of the night's skies would not be an equal to it...

thats why I used "never"

:)

shimi said...

Your poem's lovely,ethereal and like an arrow pierces the heart.

muthu said...

@ Marina- Am glad my poem refreshed U. :)

muthu said...

@ Shimi - am so very happy-- My poem pierced Ur heart.... :D

thanks 4 commenting.....

Do visit again....

Arv said...

beautiful mate.... take care...

little by little , bit by bit said...

beautiful...

Cinderella. said...

Oh wow ! beautiful !
I loved the way you put the dance forms in the lilies...awesome !

muthu said...

@arv -- thanks 4 the compliments...

cheers.. :)

muthu said...

@ Cindrella -- :) I loved all seeing all those dance forms in the reality show -- "So U think U can dance..."

hmhm... I always wanted to do a bit of ball room dancing...

& I will sure do the same soon. :)

cheers..

muthu said...

@ littleby little, bit by bit--

thanks. :)

do drop by 4 more beautifull stuff.. :)

Jo said...

Every woman should have a beautiful poem written about her like that.

Beautiful!

sm said...

good poem

Keshi said...

I love the image so very much!


**Her flowing hair-
Her beauty's lair;
As dark as the night's sky can never be-
As dense as love will ever always be-


beautifully expressed WOW!

Keshi.

pranksygang said...

hey i have tagged you ... peep into my blog!

muthu said...

@ jo -- :) Indeed Jo...

If women are not celebrated, then who are to be celebrated.

:)


cheers

muthu said...

@ sm- thanks 4 your compliments.. :)

muthu said...

@ Keshi -- I too loved writing those lines....

And the pic is from pro.corbis.com-
that web site has a bucket load of great pics & all of the pics I use are always from the same.

cheers.. :)

muthu said...

@ pranksygang -- will sure do...

my net connection @ home is a bit of a problem child. Will sure answer your tag as soon as I get my connection fixed.


Cheers.. :)

Keshi said...

thats where I get my pics too :)

Keshi.

bondgal_rulz said...

Very very refreshing poem!!

Cheers

muthu said...

:) am glad my poem refreshed U.. :)

Chriz said...

lovely
lovely
lovely

i wanna get lost in love too

muthu said...

@ Chriz- Hey.... I thought, U were lost in love!!!!

Usirae said...

AWESOME, INDEED YOU GAVE NEW VIEW TO FEMININITY,

muthu said...

@ Usirae

thanks 4 your comments-

Do visit again. :)

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