The Snap-
The Poem-
A few single lilies - lost in her locks
Sparkled; laughed with delight;
Sparked; broke a few rays of light;
Scattered a few rainbows
Splattered were a skew of Spectra-
Of the seven colors known &
Of a dozen few unknown-
A few single lilies - lost in her locks
Danced along with the rhythm of the wind;
Salsa & Tango; with a bit of
foxtrot thrown in.
Waltz & quickstep;
Zinging it up with-
the east coast swing.
A few single lilies- lost in her locks
were blessed & kissed
And as stars they were christened.
Their laughter & twinkle immortalized.
In curves of her hair;
swaying with the breeze-
playing in the bliss
of eternal despair;
Her flowing hair-
Her beauty's lair;
As dark as the night's sky can never be-
As dense as love will ever always be-
A few single lilies - lost in her locks......
46 comments:
bloody beautiful...lingering freshness!
dude, u r ready for 'http://readwritepoem.org/' do visit here n find petically talented ppl like u...i am poetically-challenged n cant critique beyond - beautiful,etc !
AWESOME....superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb after a long time am visiting your blog and am in love with this post...
Rehreshing and beautiful!! :) Btw you should take Vinnie's advice! :)
it was top class muthu. i so loved it. amazing it was :)
your take is refreshing and rejuvenating :)
thank you for sharin!
beautiful and very delightful
@ Vinnie- Thanks 4 your compliments Vinnie...
am so happy my poem refreshed U. :)
& I will sure visit the site. :)
@ sowmi- am so glad U liked my poem. :)
@ Aditi- Thanks.. Sure.. Will do. :)
@ Preetilata【ツ】 -- :):) thanks 4 your compliments... :):)
Keep visiting.
@ AD- Am always happy to share... & am so happy to have rejuvenated U.. :)
@ Lazyking- Thanks 4 the compliments...
do keep visiting.. :)
Transports you to another place that's better and has that beautiful girl with the wind in her hair. Brilliant flow and varied degrees of meaning.Bravo!
wow, nice one!
:0)
Shouldn't it be-
as dark as the night's sky can "ever" be?
Nice sweet poem :)
So...light and refreshing and, uh, PRETTY, really! I loved it! Like a breath of fresh air. =)
@ anirudh - thanks 4 ur compliments man.. :)
& yeah I too loved the gal with her hair flying in the pic.
@ Meera - Thanks.. :)
@ Priya - If I am gonna use "can ever be" then I am referring that the nights sky's best darkness is equal to the darkness of her hair but
I wanna mean--- her hair is so dark tat even the darkest of the night's skies would not be an equal to it...
thats why I used "never"
:)
Your poem's lovely,ethereal and like an arrow pierces the heart.
@ Marina- Am glad my poem refreshed U. :)
@ Shimi - am so very happy-- My poem pierced Ur heart.... :D
thanks 4 commenting.....
Do visit again....
beautiful mate.... take care...
beautiful...
Oh wow ! beautiful !
I loved the way you put the dance forms in the lilies...awesome !
@arv -- thanks 4 the compliments...
cheers.. :)
@ Cindrella -- :) I loved all seeing all those dance forms in the reality show -- "So U think U can dance..."
hmhm... I always wanted to do a bit of ball room dancing...
& I will sure do the same soon. :)
cheers..
@ littleby little, bit by bit--
thanks. :)
do drop by 4 more beautifull stuff.. :)
Every woman should have a beautiful poem written about her like that.
Beautiful!
good poem
I love the image so very much!
**Her flowing hair-
Her beauty's lair;
As dark as the night's sky can never be-
As dense as love will ever always be-
beautifully expressed WOW!
Keshi.
hey i have tagged you ... peep into my blog!
@ jo -- :) Indeed Jo...
If women are not celebrated, then who are to be celebrated.
:)
cheers
@ sm- thanks 4 your compliments.. :)
@ Keshi -- I too loved writing those lines....
And the pic is from pro.corbis.com-
that web site has a bucket load of great pics & all of the pics I use are always from the same.
cheers.. :)
@ pranksygang -- will sure do...
my net connection @ home is a bit of a problem child. Will sure answer your tag as soon as I get my connection fixed.
Cheers.. :)
thats where I get my pics too :)
Keshi.
Very very refreshing poem!!
Cheers
:) am glad my poem refreshed U.. :)
lovely
lovely
lovely
i wanna get lost in love too
@ Chriz- Hey.... I thought, U were lost in love!!!!
AWESOME, INDEED YOU GAVE NEW VIEW TO FEMININITY,
@ Usirae
thanks 4 your comments-
Do visit again. :)
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