The snap-
Her smile-
The curve of her smile- The crescent moon's isle; The sound of her laugh- a few flowers broke, bloomed & coughed- love is bliss.
My love-
In the silence of the night, I am in bliss. The symphony of her voice - thy music. My love - the crescendo of thy orchestra.
The rant-
No I am not a poet. It's just that my heart overflows with so much love seeing her smile that it cant help but rant a bit.
The soul music-
The curve of her rainbow earlobes jingling with the dance of the dew drop earrings is music,life,reason & treason to my soul.
The difference-
My love is a solitary lass. Wither it will not; Tethered with hopes; I will wait; a few seconds or a few centuries makes no difference.
The dawn-
Dew drops few; on the green leaves new; grinned to yew; with sun shine skew; Just born dawn sparkled & smiled.
Art-
It drizzled & then drenched- rainbows rained- She blushed & brushed spectra amok. Picasso's & Van Gogh's failed miserably in vain.
Author's note-
Guys, these are a few poems that I tweeted a while ago. & no these do not form any rhyming patterns. They are just a few wild thoughts put together. Hope U guys like them.
Cheers.. :)
33 comments:
Honestly, Muthu I love this so much.
Esp. The Dawn is my favuorite :) Loved it :)
I just love ur tweets .Period.
@ sowmi- :) am glad u liked it.. :)
my fav is the soul music. :)
@ preposterous girl --
& am so glad U loved them. :)
cheers.
The dawn - is just my idea of a beautiful dawn - my favorite part of the day....u have stolen my lines!
Art - is witty...typically Muthu-ishtyle
n that smile was hopefully mine!
i love such poems.. :)
lovely bro
its pure.. its clear.. its beautiful... straight from the heart... :)
This is just so beautiful.. I loved all of them..
Though I'd say, not all species of the female gender are fair and a poem like this goes to all of us :)(this comes from reading your tag-the fairer sex)
@ vinnie- thanks 4 your compliments Vinnie
& that smile was of course Yours.. :)
@ chriz- thanks 4 the compliments bro
am glad U enjoyed them. :)
@ Deepika Gupta- Wow... a spontaneous compliment. thanks. :)
& yeah- every poem is straight from the heart....
cheers.. :)
@ netika lumb- thanks 4 your compliments....
& I really think -- all species of the female gender are of course fair-- we jus dont see them as lovely as they are...
cheers.. :)
ohh surely you are no poet ...
but you are more creative and it goes like blasts ...
just a few lines and they speak a lot
Your poem makes the heart"ache"& eyes"teary".
@ deeps- am glad U felt so....
thanks 4 the compliments dude.. :)
@ Shimi- Really.... wow--- am so happy that my words reached U....
:-)
I love your these wild thoughts put together... Nice to come across urs via Sow.. :)
@ Sujata - :D
Cheers.. :)
@ Mitr- Friend-
thanks 4 ur compliments... :)
Do visit again..
cheers.
Sure.. And do drop into my blogs as well when u find time... :)
@ Mitr - Friend-- Sure... :)
really nice collection dude..nice blog!!
@ rahul - thanks dude. :)
do visit again 4 more interesting stuff.
cheers. :)
nice pic
like the post
@ sm-
thanks. :)
Nice poems... well written...
Loved the rant part. Truly wonderful. The ease with which you like is lovely!
Aaaww those are truly beautiful words. Her Smile is so beautiful :)
@ Ajeeth boaz ---
Thanks a lot. :)
@ Tanya Sehgal ---
Thank-you for your compliments. :)
@ Khushbu Verma --
yes, her smile is always beautiful. esp when she doesn't want to know others that she is smiling and then blushes when people notice. :)
@ Love to Experiment ---
:) :) :)
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