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"Nope, I don't really have anything new to say. but then, I always have something amazing to tell about things that you already know!!"


Sunday, December 9, 2012

Always late - 55 fiction

The Snap-

The Tale-

“Always late”
They stared at her in silence.

“Irresponsible jerk!” 
She looked around defensively.

“Oh, Trust me……………… I should know.” Her tart voice pitched up.
“He was late even for our marriage”

She nodded to the others.
“Wait till he gets here. He is going to wish; he crashed the car once more……But now Alone.”

Author's note-

The theme of the 55 fiction is Ghost. I wanted the fiction to be vague and cryptic in the first read. But subtly humorous during the second. I hope that you guys like it.

When I read in my comments page- that a 55 fiction contest is being conduced by Sasi, I felt that it was just tailor-made for me, as I was not getting time to write a good post for almost a month now. I wish him cheers and all the best for his venture.

And I loved that picture I found on Google  Damn. She is hot, cute and at the same time angry. Now, that's some girl. :P

This post is written for the Best 55 Fictionist Contest, hosted by Sasikumar Raja Blogs at Beginner


Sasikumar Rajappan said...

It's an innovative one... and liked it very much...thanks for participating... take care...

Anupama K. Mazumder said...

Perfect image.. and those 55 words have the desired impact!

Anonymous said...

That was quite a different. I liked the concept, as Sasi said, quite innovative.

Thanks for telling about the contest. Sounds interesting :)

Harikrishna said...

Oh a haunting one... Excellent.. really got through me..

Neha Agarwal said...

good one.. i liked the author's note more :p

Anonymous said...

Good one...really

muthu said...

@ Sasikumar Rajappan ---

I am glad you liked it. :)

muthu said...

@ Anupama K. Mazumder ---

Thanks for your warm comments.. :)

muthu said...
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muthu said...

@ adreamygal --

And I hope you too participate. :)

muthu said...

@ Harikrishna ---

I am simply glad that my tale got to you!!

muthu said...

@ Neha Agarwal --

Really! That makes me bubbly with happiness. I always want to write stories that will get to my friends reading to some extent. But what I really enjoy is writing those simple author's note- just to let you know whats running in my mind while I wrote the post.

Thanks a million for your comments.

muthu said...

@ thefactfiction --

I am glad you think so... Welcome to my blog. Also, do visit again for more interesting stuff. :)

A Great Liar said...

Hahah! Very interesting, and nicely written as well.

Btw, first time here. Following your blog. :)

Wish you all the best with the contest...

muthu said...

@ A Great Liar ---

Thank-you for those warm comments. Welcome to my blog and I hope you have a good time -- reading stuff here.

Thanks again for your follow. I hope that my stories will keep your taste buds tingling. :)

Bikramjit said...

its LOVe.. she wants him with her


muthu said...

@ Bikramjit ---

And not just normal one at that... Some real Tough love.. :P:P

sakthi said...

i loved it...
had fun readin it...
nice pic :)

muthu said...

@ sakthi ---

:D :D :D

Roshni AaMom said...

It's a really good one, Muthu!!! I must confess, I gasped and then laughed at the end!

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