The Snap-
The Tale-
“Always late”
They stared at her in silence.
“Irresponsible jerk!”
She looked around defensively.
“Oh, Trust me……………… I should know.” Her tart voice pitched up.
“He was late even for our marriage”
She nodded to the others.
“Wait till he gets
here. He is going to wish; he crashed the car once more……But now Alone.”
Author's note-
The theme of the 55 fiction is Ghost. I wanted the fiction to be vague and cryptic in the first read. But subtly humorous during the second. I hope that you guys like it.
When I read in my comments page- that a 55 fiction contest is being conduced by Sasi, I felt that it was just tailor-made for me, as I was not getting time to write a good post for almost a month now. I wish him cheers and all the best for his venture.
And I loved that picture I found on Google Damn. She is hot, cute and at the same time angry. Now, that's some girl. :P
25 comments:
It's an innovative one... and liked it very much...thanks for participating... take care...
Perfect image.. and those 55 words have the desired impact!
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That was quite a different. I liked the concept, as Sasi said, quite innovative.
Thanks for telling about the contest. Sounds interesting :)
Oh a haunting one... Excellent.. really got through me..
good one.. i liked the author's note more :p
Good one...really
@ Sasikumar Rajappan ---
I am glad you liked it. :)
@ Anupama K. Mazumder ---
Thanks for your warm comments.. :)
@ adreamygal --
And I hope you too participate. :)
@ Harikrishna ---
I am simply glad that my tale got to you!!
@ Neha Agarwal --
Really! That makes me bubbly with happiness. I always want to write stories that will get to my friends reading to some extent. But what I really enjoy is writing those simple author's note- just to let you know whats running in my mind while I wrote the post.
Thanks a million for your comments.
@ thefactfiction --
I am glad you think so... Welcome to my blog. Also, do visit again for more interesting stuff. :)
Hahah! Very interesting, and nicely written as well.
Btw, first time here. Following your blog. :)
Wish you all the best with the contest...
@ A Great Liar ---
Thank-you for those warm comments. Welcome to my blog and I hope you have a good time -- reading stuff here.
Thanks again for your follow. I hope that my stories will keep your taste buds tingling. :)
its LOVe.. she wants him with her
Bikram's
@ Bikramjit ---
And not just normal one at that... Some real Tough love.. :P:P
i loved it...
had fun readin it...
nice pic :)
@ sakthi ---
:D :D :D
It's a really good one, Muthu!!! I must confess, I gasped and then laughed at the end!
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