The Quote -

"Nope, I don't really have anything new to say. but then, I always have something amazing to tell about things that you already know!!"

-Muthu

Saturday, June 30, 2012

Two Minutes- a 55 fiction

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.



The snap-




The fiction- 


"Remember our first time....."
She almost smiled. "yeah, until those noodles got cooked"
"Two minutes..."


Silence hung, hard.
"I want to go back.." she whispered, eyes closed.


A lone tear, few seconds dragged by.

"Here we are" he whispered back.
She smelled noodles in the kitchen and started to sob. He bent down & kissed her still healing, scarred face.




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49 comments:

Kappu said...

Lovely :) thats a lot to convey via FFF!

muthu said...

@ Kappu --

Thank you. I might have gone some 5 words more than FFF limit but did not really have the heart to cut anymore words.

Vikas Khair said...

Just Great Kappu very moving All The Best for BAT-29

Rajrupa Gupta said...

Brilliant indeed for a F55!

C. Suresh said...

Superb and superbly moving

Manasa said...

Tender!Touching and true to heart!!

TTT said...

Superb ! It was so touching ...

Oldfox004 said...

hey Muthu1

great to see u blogging man:)

Diwakar Narayan said...

Excellently written!

Someone is Special said...

Loved it so much... Keep writing more 55's.. All the best for BAT 29..

Someone is Special

aativas said...

I wonder - is it about domestic violence?

muthu said...

@ Vikas Khair --

Thanks for dropping by. And it's muthu....

Shashiprakash Saini said...

nicely written
all the best

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muthu said...

@ Rajrupa Gupta --

:) ... Thanks a lot. I love writing stories with endings that be guessed.

muthu said...

@ Rajrupa Gupta --

Am so glad it moved you.

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muthu said...

@ Manasa --

Thank you.... I wanted it to be something honest.

muthu said...

@ TTT --

:) Welcome to the blog...

muthu said...

@ Oldfox004 --

I am glad to see you here. After such a long time. How are you??

muthu said...

@ Diwakar Narayan --

Thank you & welcome to my blog.

muthu said...

@ Someone is Special --

Glad you loved it. And yeah, will sure write more 55 fictions. (Do try the older FFF on the blog).

Thanks.

muthu said...

@ aativas --

hmhm.... Not really. When I imagined it, I wanted it to be about a couple recovering from a disaster. (The wide with her healing scar and it's emotional trauma). I wanted the 2 minutes to represent a warm memory that they cherish and hold on to.

And yeah, after reading your comment-- The story does have a possible connotation of domestic violence. Thank you for your comment.

muthu said...

@ Shashiprakash Saini --

Thank you for your comments, Sir.

Sandy said...

Wow. It is people like you who inspire me to try my hand at 55 writing. I hope I can be as good some day!

rohanabstractedly said...

Nicely expressed!! :) ATB!

Ash Sharma said...

A lovely 55. Nice work

JJ said...

Ah!..Thats a really sweet one!. And 55F has been done good justice with this post!

jaish_vats said...

Hi muthu

Even I thought of domestic violence like Aativas. Re-read after reading ur reply to her . Very well written

muthu said...

@ Sandy --

Thank you. I am so glad to have inspired you into trying out 55 fiction.

muthu said...

@ rohanabstractedly --

Thank you..

muthu said...

@ Ash Sharma --

Thank you....

muthu said...

@ JJ --

hmhm... I am glad you think so. :)

muthu said...

@ jaish_vats --

Thank you... And Domestic violence is a very sensitive subject. May be I will try my next 55 fiction on it. Would be great to have your comments then. :)

Panchali said...

Muthu,

That was NEAT!You have a delightful way with words... Beautiful imagery....And I loved the way you concluded....but, did the sore heal really?
Great take...

muthu said...

@ Panchali --

hmhm.... I think, time heals- even the worst of the wounds. but then it really helps to have company during that, Don't you think??? :)

sakthi said...

it felt good just lik it was supsd 2...

muthu said...

@sakthi-

Thanks.. :)

Richi Baidwan said...

Love is a blessed thing. Good Job with the short narration/style :)

muthu said...

@ Richi Baidwan -

:) -- Thanks -- :)

Bikramjit said...

Love is beautiful and lucky are those who find love ..

and the story is SAD but awesome hope she gets well veyr veyr soon

Bikram's

muthu said...

@ Bikramjit --

Yes, the story can be sad but then I think that their love will overcome the same. After all, the 2 minutes noodles is not just a memory but can be said as a shimmer of hope, lit from him to her. What say??

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