The Quote -

"Nope, I don't really have anything new to say. but then, I always have something amazing to tell about things that you already know!!"

-Muthu

Tuesday, June 1, 2010

The murderer - A 55 fiction.

The Snap-






The Fiction-


"I did'nt kill her...."

"hmhm hmhm"

"Really! I am innnocent...."

"hmhm hmhm"

"Ofcourse, You do not believe me!!!"

"You think so."

"Afterall, instant refusal shows guilt. Doesnt it???"

"Probably."

"So you think that, I am the murderer. Dont you not???"

"No! I dont. But you do know something about who killed her. Dont you? Tell me now or I will kill you too."



Author's Note-

I wanted to write a crime fiction in just 55 words or less. & I did not want the fiction to be something predictable or dull. So, I took this idea of a dark comical twist to a murder fiction and expanded on it. I hope you guys like it. Will soon post more on the same idea. Do leave back your comments & criticisms.

See you guys soon.

10 comments:

Pavitra said...

Nice..!! Well done!! liked the twist..

muthu said...

@ Pavitra .... --

:)

& I am glad that you liked it.

The Unadorned said...

Great ideas come in flashes, so be on it and scrap ahead.

Thanks, by the way, for touching my blog.

Nanda
http://ramblingnanda.blogspot.com

Aadya said...

Or I'll kill you too? Nice.

vinny said...

hehehhehehee...that was a smart piece...like i always say..u should work on ur crime novel instead...

dont forget me when u get famous!

hows u? :)

muthu said...

@ A_N_Nanda --

It was a pleasure.. :)

muthu said...

@ Aadya. --

Glad you found so..

muthu said...

@ Vinnie --

Thanks..

It has been so long, since last saw your comment...

It gladdens me.. :)

I am doing good. What abt you...

& Ofcourse.. How can I 4get you.. :D

Aditi..............:) said...

lovely twist in the end...keep it up! :-)

muthu said...

@ Aditi..............


:) Thanks.. am glad you liked it..