The Fiction-
"I did'nt kill her...."
"hmhm hmhm"
"Really! I am innnocent...."
"hmhm hmhm"
"Ofcourse, You do not believe me!!!"
"You think so."
"Afterall, instant refusal shows guilt. Doesnt it???"
"Probably."
"So you think that, I am the murderer. Dont you not???"
"No! I dont. But you do know something about who killed her. Dont you? Tell me now or I will kill you too."
Author's Note-
I wanted to write a crime fiction in just 55 words or less. & I did not want the fiction to be something predictable or dull. So, I took this idea of a dark comical twist to a murder fiction and expanded on it. I hope you guys like it. Will soon post more on the same idea. Do leave back your comments & criticisms.
See you guys soon.
10 comments:
Nice..!! Well done!! liked the twist..
@ Pavitra .... --
:)
& I am glad that you liked it.
Great ideas come in flashes, so be on it and scrap ahead.
Thanks, by the way, for touching my blog.
Nanda
http://ramblingnanda.blogspot.com
Or I'll kill you too? Nice.
hehehhehehee...that was a smart piece...like i always say..u should work on ur crime novel instead...
dont forget me when u get famous!
hows u? :)
@ A_N_Nanda --
It was a pleasure.. :)
@ Aadya. --
Glad you found so..
@ Vinnie --
Thanks..
It has been so long, since last saw your comment...
It gladdens me.. :)
I am doing good. What abt you...
& Ofcourse.. How can I 4get you.. :D
lovely twist in the end...keep it up! :-)
@ Aditi..............
:) Thanks.. am glad you liked it..
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