The Quote -

"Nope, I don't really have anything new to say. but then, I always have something amazing to tell about things that you already know!!"


Wednesday, October 7, 2009

A Romance; Eternal - A Poem

The poem -

An evening's eve
Orange light in sieve.
The sky majestic,
Loudly artistic;

-the vibrant spread of blue
Red, yellow & white in hue;
A renaissance painting,
The dusk's lovely setting.

A fleeting stage,
For the last act;
Of a love's pact;

A romance eternal;
A passion Infernal-


He looked at her,
A warm look;
-his charm's brook,
Gushing care &
lust a bare.

He looked at her,
his love; his heart,
his spirit set apart;


A fairy; fair,
A beauty rare.
In a sari white,
Gracefully light.

A classy lady,
His eye's own candy.

With coy blush; her face,
-A pink flush;

She looked at him.

Her love's knight;
Her night's light;

An angel regal;
Simmering passion-
Her love's paralegal;

She looked at him.

The love-

Time halted;
It's chime thwarted.

Nothing was spoken &
Nothing was needed to be; When

Silence was heard &
Silence was all that needed be.

The end of her lips,
Cringed & crooked.
The bend of her smile,
Singed & sparked.

As drunk he was;
Of her beauty
He got drunk more-

-in her love,
In her love for him.

They rushed.

They hugged,
their lips locked.
Nooks & corners,
caressed and kissed.
Million stories,
shared & cherished.

Sweat & semen-
Wet in heaven.

No- body moved;
No- thing was seen;

Love alone moved;
Love alone was seen;

Seconds were savored;
By two hearts love favored.

The parting-

Like every sublime
that moment too passed.
Like love, time too
doesn't fall nor
does it falter

A moment had; unhad.
A love had; forever had.

He kissed her hand &
took his leave.
Bidding him adieu,
She smiled - exquisite.

They parted their ways,
Still lost in each others rays.
Still red, the warmth of the brace,
They parted their ways.

A Romance eternal.
A passion Infernal.

Never did they show
the tears they swallowed

The sun and the Moon ----

Author's Note -

I dedicate this poem to My blogging & online chat friend Richa, who got married recently. Girl, I wish you with all my heart - A blissful married life. & a love as divine as between that of the sun & the moon during the dusk.

Guys,you can wish her at her blog --

About the Poem, I have tried to bring out the love that I felt between the sun and the moon in the passing moment they shared in the sky during the dusk time. & Since I wanted it to be special for Richa- I took my time to write and post it. Hope you guys like it.

Will meet you guys soon..
With more of my experiences in Hyderabad.

Until then...



Srushti Rao said...

Awesome... I have no words. Brilliant! Truly brilliant!


Hopeless Romantic said...

great poem...but richa is just engaged...she is getting married in late nov....:P

venus66 said...

Wonderful poem.

Meow said...

cute poem :)

oRange* said...

awh, so cute :) always!

Inty swetha said...

wow!! its very romantic!!

яノςんム said...

this poem is really really beautiful :) and thank you so very much for dedicating it to me :)
i owe u this one.. :)
and Amit is correct :) I am juz engaged and the wedding is in November :)
You are such a sweetheart for writing this specifically for me and that too so very beautifully :)


muthu said...

@ Srushti Rao ---

Thanks 4 your compliments... and

Welcome to my blog....

Hope 2 see more you here... :)


Hey, you have an awesome smile.. :D

muthu said...

@ Hopeless Romantic ---

oops... I got the date mixed...

O boy, my surprise gift just lost it's element of surprise... I suppose... :P

muthu said...

@ venus66 --

Thanks dude.. :)

muthu said...

@ Meow --

Not as cute as your spontaneity, I suppose.. :D

muthu said...

@ oRange* --

Am I cute always...

hmhm--- I thought I am usually a bit towards the philosophical side rather than cute..

But anyways your compliments did put a smile on my face....

thanks gal.... :)

muthu said...

@ Inty swetha --

Thanks 4 your compliments yaar....

Yeah, romanticism is just about what every poet whatever he writes about sees in his words..



muthu said...

@ яノςんム ---

Yaar.. I wanted to gift it 4 your marriage... & I mixed up the dates -- & now spoiled the element of surprise.... :(

& I enjoyed writing it 4 you...

So, no sweat.. :)

B said...

First time here. Came from Nikita's blog.

Neat! I couldn't have thought of that ending :)


muthu said...

@ B ---

Welcome to my blog... :)

Hope 2 see more of you here...

& hmhm... I wanted the the ending to be poignant.. :)

that's why I brought in nature to my rescue.. :D

workhard said...

Lovely work ...........

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muthu said...


thanks.. :)

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Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem !!

I have always wanted to write poetry but dont know why the words doesnt flow... But reading your lines i feel this is exactly what i wanted to say to my love...

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