"Four Different Stories - Four Different Times - Four Different Emotions - About One Character - The Train"
0600 Hours:
A moist breeze laden with wet promises of the day rushed
past the speeding train. A few early risers and a few empty cabins floated past
a city rising to the embers of the sun.
Littered out on the roof tops and on the window sills, a few
kids alone stared at the passage mesmerized.
1200 Hours:
Nobody knew who dropped their lunch on the entrance of the
carriage; Warm rice and curry, still steaming and thrumming along with the rhythm
of the train; its spicy flavor and fragrance flicking the roiling appetites of the
passengers.
The passengers jumped across the spilled food, their attire
and their hunger neat & intact.
1800 Hours:
The train started to sweat. It’s every orifice enamored with
the crowd returning from their jobs to their homes. Humans hung to each and
every piece of holding and standing space available; jostling at each other; their
parts and pieces hanging out of the vehicle; squirming with life;
The train plodded on.
2400 Hours:
A few beggars moved from compartment to compartment; picking
up whatever hooped their fancy. A red kerchief, a bottle with some water left
in it, a few news papers, a couple of ear buds. Carrying the echoes of life
left behind, the train clanged hollow.
Amidst these empty ensembles, those beggars compared their
today’s loots with glee.
I have been wanting to start blogging again for quite a while. For that, I was looking for an idea both interesting and also challenging. A jump start of sorts. And when i was playing football today evening, I had a eureka moment about what I was going to write.
A group of 55 fictions, that would all stand alone as separate fictions but when put together can evoke a singular narrative. A single character narrative.
And hence, the story! after some deliberation, I decided to take train as the character. (Last Week, I visited Chennai by train and had an awesome weekend. Hence the inspiration.) I hope you guys like it. Also, I got a few amazing photos while searching for nice snaps of trains. Do visit again to read the stories I frame on those images. Cheers.
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How trains fascinate us!
ReplyDeleteNice stories smartly joined. Great idea!
Much conveyed in a few words :)
Interesting idea. Will keep checking back to see how your story evolves.
ReplyDeletegreat everyday ideas knitted in a train journey. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Muthu,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you presented the story.
I am glad to invite you to write a story for our book "Blank Space" - Filled with Inspiration - which will feature 100 Writers and 100 stories. You could join writing along with people like Major. Surendra Poonia, Dr. Vikas Amte and many others.
If interested, please drop a mail to publish@propelsteps.com , we shall discuss. Note: You can submit your previously published stories on your blog as well.
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so many little stories making a BIG one story .. great idea sir
ReplyDeleteand welcome back :)
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@ anitha -
ReplyDeleteYes, I think that there is something in our primitive souls that is enthralled by the sight of trains. Thank for your comments and Welcome to my blog. Cheers.
@ pixelvoyages-
ReplyDeleteThank you and I will sure put some some nice stories for you.
Cheers.
@ Uppal -
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comments and welcome to my blog. Cheers.
@ Dinesh radhakrishnan -
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment and your invite. I hope to see more of you here.
I went through your blog and have replied to the mail ID provided. Cheers.
@ bikram
ReplyDeleteThank you. I am glad to be back. :) Cheers.
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