The Snap-
“But mom, I just wanted to save you time.” A tiny voice
justified.
“So, you soaked the clothes yourself.”
The rain drenched kid looked up with pride. “Yes, yes, just
like you do before washing”
“Yeah” she said with
a suppressed grin “but I usually don’t wear them when soaking…”
“Okay” her kid said quite obediently. “Next time I will remember it”
It was then she burst out laughing.
Author's note-
I wanted to write a small but a sweet fiction for - The Surf Excel Matic #soaknomore Contest. And I wanted the kid's gender to be ambiguous so that more people can relate to the fiction. Hope you guys like it.
Ha ha .. Cute :)
ReplyDelete@ nan-
ReplyDeleteThanks. I wanted it to be so. Just like a well made ad for #soaknomore. :)
They could use this one for their ads muthu,,,...Very sweet
ReplyDeleteYeah!! Hope they would feel the same way. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers.
it is awesome.....will be pretty interesting in mini screen..:)
ReplyDeletesimple ... wouldn't it b better if u had elaborated on it....
ReplyDelete@ Anagha --
ReplyDeleteYeah, It would indeed be interesting. Welcome to my blog. and thank you for your comments!!
@ sakthi sri --
ReplyDeletehmhm... I wanted it to be simple. Rather than going descriptive about the narration, I wanted something short and cute that would deliver the message -- #soaknomore in a cute and if you may allow- a warm and humorous way.
I wanted you remember the idea rather than the surrounding hoopla. Hope I achieved that.
And thanks for you pretty sharp comment. I myself was quite a cat on the wall before posting it. But then decided to go for the shorter version rather than pulling the story apart with narrative.
Hope I answered you!!
Hi Muthu,
ReplyDeleteReally creative - this one! I you could really have directed an Ad for this one :) Couldn't have humored myself better.
Thanks and keep writing
- India Violet
@ India Violet -
ReplyDeleteGlad you think so. Cheers. :)
awwww...Fantastic imagery and a lovely lovely attempt....:)
ReplyDelete- awed and spell bound! Just a few words were so impactful. Muthu!! Loved it!
ReplyDeletethis was cute...but I wish there were more details or you'd have it more elaborate. Nonetheless, a nice read :)
ReplyDelete@ Panchali --
ReplyDeleteam glad that you love it. :)
@ confused Soul --
ReplyDeletehmhm... Thanks for your comments and welcome to my blog.
Well, Like I said to sakthi sri- I wanted to keep it simple. If I would have gone elaborate- I think I would have gone too much off the topic -- I would have to describe more of the rain, about the girl, about her mother and so on- that would bring down the significance of #soaknomore theme. I just wanted to leave you with a cute idea in the shortest time possible.
And I am glad that you found it cute.
Cheers. :)
You are a master of short stories.. :)
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
I can almost see the demure kid talking earnestly with his mom... Very sweet!
ReplyDelete@ Someone is Special --
ReplyDeleteWow, I am hugely complemented. I don't know - what to say.
hmhm... Creating a good story is always a definite high for me.
Cheers and Thank you. :)
@ Meoww --
ReplyDeleteI am glad for your comment. You addressed the kid as a him, though the picture suggests otherwise. Meaning, the story got to you before the picture did. Like I have put up in the author's note- I wanted the kid to be ambiguous so that more people can relate to the warmth of the kid and the mother.
And I am happy that you found the story sweet. :)
Cheers.
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ReplyDeleteHow cute!
ReplyDelete(pls delete my previous comment, i added the email id instead of name)
@ anuradha --
ReplyDeleteyeah... Welcome to my blog. Glad to have your comment.
Cheers. :)
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I don't usually do this but here you go = "aww thats so cute :D "
ReplyDeleteReally sweet. Good luck with the competition.
@ Nevin --
ReplyDeleteHonestly, I am flattered. Thanks a lot for the comment (you just made my day. :D )and welcome to my blog.
Thanks again for your wishes...
Cheers man..
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