This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.
The snap-
The fiction-
"Remember our first time....."
She almost smiled. "yeah, until those noodles got cooked"
"Two minutes..."
Silence hung, hard.
"I want to go back.." she whispered, eyes closed.
A lone tear, few seconds dragged by.
"Here we are" he whispered back.
She smelled noodles in the kitchen and started to sob. He bent down & kissed her still healing, scarred face.
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Lovely :) thats a lot to convey via FFF!
ReplyDelete@ Kappu --
ReplyDeleteThank you. I might have gone some 5 words more than FFF limit but did not really have the heart to cut anymore words.
Just Great Kappu very moving All The Best for BAT-29
ReplyDeleteBrilliant indeed for a F55!
ReplyDeleteSuperb and superbly moving
ReplyDeleteTender!Touching and true to heart!!
ReplyDeleteSuperb ! It was so touching ...
ReplyDeletehey Muthu1
ReplyDeletegreat to see u blogging man:)
Excellently written!
ReplyDeleteLoved it so much... Keep writing more 55's.. All the best for BAT 29..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
I wonder - is it about domestic violence?
ReplyDelete@ Vikas Khair --
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by. And it's muthu....
nicely written
ReplyDeleteall the best
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ReplyDelete@ Rajrupa Gupta --
ReplyDelete:) ... Thanks a lot. I love writing stories with endings that be guessed.
@ Rajrupa Gupta --
ReplyDeleteAm so glad it moved you.
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ReplyDelete@ Manasa --
ReplyDeleteThank you.... I wanted it to be something honest.
@ TTT --
ReplyDelete:) Welcome to the blog...
@ Oldfox004 --
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see you here. After such a long time. How are you??
@ Diwakar Narayan --
ReplyDeleteThank you & welcome to my blog.
@ Someone is Special --
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it. And yeah, will sure write more 55 fictions. (Do try the older FFF on the blog).
Thanks.
@ aativas --
ReplyDeletehmhm.... Not really. When I imagined it, I wanted it to be about a couple recovering from a disaster. (The wide with her healing scar and it's emotional trauma). I wanted the 2 minutes to represent a warm memory that they cherish and hold on to.
And yeah, after reading your comment-- The story does have a possible connotation of domestic violence. Thank you for your comment.
@ Shashiprakash Saini --
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments, Sir.
Wow. It is people like you who inspire me to try my hand at 55 writing. I hope I can be as good some day!
ReplyDeleteNicely expressed!! :) ATB!
ReplyDeleteA lovely 55. Nice work
ReplyDeleteAh!..Thats a really sweet one!. And 55F has been done good justice with this post!
ReplyDeleteHi muthu
ReplyDeleteEven I thought of domestic violence like Aativas. Re-read after reading ur reply to her . Very well written
@ Sandy --
ReplyDeleteThank you. I am so glad to have inspired you into trying out 55 fiction.
@ rohanabstractedly --
ReplyDeleteThank you..
@ Ash Sharma --
ReplyDeleteThank you....
@ JJ --
ReplyDeletehmhm... I am glad you think so. :)
@ jaish_vats --
ReplyDeleteThank you... And Domestic violence is a very sensitive subject. May be I will try my next 55 fiction on it. Would be great to have your comments then. :)
Muthu,
ReplyDeleteThat was NEAT!You have a delightful way with words... Beautiful imagery....And I loved the way you concluded....but, did the sore heal really?
Great take...
@ Panchali --
ReplyDeletehmhm.... I think, time heals- even the worst of the wounds. but then it really helps to have company during that, Don't you think??? :)
it felt good just lik it was supsd 2...
ReplyDelete@sakthi-
ReplyDeleteThanks.. :)
Love is a blessed thing. Good Job with the short narration/style :)
ReplyDelete@ Richi Baidwan -
ReplyDelete:) -- Thanks -- :)
Love is beautiful and lucky are those who find love ..
ReplyDeleteand the story is SAD but awesome hope she gets well veyr veyr soon
Bikram's
@ Bikramjit --
ReplyDeleteYes, the story can be sad but then I think that their love will overcome the same. After all, the 2 minutes noodles is not just a memory but can be said as a shimmer of hope, lit from him to her. What say??
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