Tuesday, June 1, 2010

The murderer - A 55 fiction.

The Snap-






The Fiction-


"I did'nt kill her...."

"hmhm hmhm"

"Really! I am innnocent...."

"hmhm hmhm"

"Ofcourse, You do not believe me!!!"

"You think so."

"Afterall, instant refusal shows guilt. Doesnt it???"

"Probably."

"So you think that, I am the murderer. Dont you not???"

"No! I dont. But you do know something about who killed her. Dont you? Tell me now or I will kill you too."



Author's Note-

I wanted to write a crime fiction in just 55 words or less. & I did not want the fiction to be something predictable or dull. So, I took this idea of a dark comical twist to a murder fiction and expanded on it. I hope you guys like it. Will soon post more on the same idea. Do leave back your comments & criticisms.

See you guys soon.

10 comments:

  1. PavitraJune 1, 2010 at 10:56 AM

    Nice..!! Well done!! liked the twist..

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  2. muthuJune 8, 2010 at 7:12 PM

    @ Pavitra .... --

    :)

    & I am glad that you liked it.

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  3. The UnadornedJune 9, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    Great ideas come in flashes, so be on it and scrap ahead.

    Thanks, by the way, for touching my blog.

    Nanda
    http://ramblingnanda.blogspot.com

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  4. AadyaJune 9, 2010 at 10:29 PM

    Or I'll kill you too? Nice.

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  5. vinnyJune 10, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    hehehhehehee...that was a smart piece...like i always say..u should work on ur crime novel instead...

    dont forget me when u get famous!

    hows u? :)

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  6. muthuJune 10, 2010 at 7:55 AM

    @ A_N_Nanda --

    It was a pleasure.. :)

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  7. muthuJune 10, 2010 at 7:56 AM

    @ Aadya. --

    Glad you found so..

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  8. muthuJune 10, 2010 at 7:58 AM

    @ Vinnie --

    Thanks..

    It has been so long, since last saw your comment...

    It gladdens me.. :)

    I am doing good. What abt you...

    & Ofcourse.. How can I 4get you.. :D

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  9. Aditi..............:)June 27, 2010 at 10:19 PM

    lovely twist in the end...keep it up! :-)

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  10. muthuJuly 4, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    @ Aditi..............


    :) Thanks.. am glad you liked it..

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