Sunday, November 1, 2009

The second life - A 55 fiction

The snap-





The fiction-


"So, Did you name your daughter after me...."

"No.. What about you? Did you name your son after me..."

"Do you even need to ask... Of course... No."


They both chuckled.
Dry humor, as always....

Just like the old days. A cool breeze swept past them as they inquired about each other health and family.

Living on with a broken heart isn't really that bad. Is it??




Author's note-

I wrote this story after reading in a daily about how a lot of people end their lives because of broken hearts. I believe that love should make people live & enjoy life rather than the opposite.

14 comments:

  1. Interesting :) But its difficult for a gal atleast to live with broken heart blv me.. *sighs*

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  2. Thats why I say..rise in love, not fall in love:)

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  3. Hello from Russia!
    Can I quote a post "No teme" in your blog with the link to you?

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  4. Ismein tto 67 words hain par!!! :P

    Nice one nonetheless. :)

    And thanks for the compliment for the DP. :) :)

    Cheers

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  5. @ Meow ---

    hmhm... yeah you may be right..

    But then, life is just too good to stop it na .. :)


    Trust me.... life will always brings you smiles ... just wait 4 it.. :)


    cheers..

    & Welcome 2 my blog..

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  6. @ venus --

    yeah.. I agree with you completely in that aspect..

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  7. @ Renu ---

    Yeah you do have a point but

    falling in love sounds more poignant..

    doesn't it ... :P

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  8. @ Anonymous --

    yup.. go ahead & thanks 4 the interest.. :)

    & welcome to my blog.. :)

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  9. @ bondgal_rulz ---

    oops.. I must have counted it wrong.. :P

    & thanks 4 the compliment..

    cheers...

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  10. just loved this one... :) its such a sweet story :) well penned :)

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  12. @ Rajlakshmi ---

    :) thanks 4 the compliments.. :)

    cheers....

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