Thursday, June 25, 2009

A few single lilies - A poem

The Snap-



The Poem-


A few single lilies - lost in her locks


Sparkled; laughed with delight;
Sparked; broke a few rays of light;

Scattered a few rainbows
Splattered were a skew of Spectra-

Of the seven colors known &
Of a dozen few unknown-



A few single lilies - lost in her locks

Danced along with the rhythm of the wind;
Salsa & Tango; with a bit of
foxtrot thrown in.

Waltz & quickstep;
Zinging it up with-
the east coast swing.



A few single lilies- lost in her locks

were blessed & kissed

And as stars they were christened.

Their laughter & twinkle immortalized.


In curves of her hair;
swaying with the breeze-
playing in the bliss
of eternal despair;

Her flowing hair-
Her beauty's lair;

As dark as the night's sky can never be-
As dense as love will ever always be-



A few single lilies - lost in her locks
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46 comments:

  1. bloody beautiful...lingering freshness!
    dude, u r ready for 'http://readwritepoem.org/' do visit here n find petically talented ppl like u...i am poetically-challenged n cant critique beyond - beautiful,etc !

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  2. AWESOME....superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb after a long time am visiting your blog and am in love with this post...

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  3. Rehreshing and beautiful!! :) Btw you should take Vinnie's advice! :)

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  4. it was top class muthu. i so loved it. amazing it was :)

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  5. your take is refreshing and rejuvenating :)
    thank you for sharin!

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  6. @ Vinnie- Thanks 4 your compliments Vinnie...

    am so happy my poem refreshed U. :)

    & I will sure visit the site. :)

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  7. @ sowmi- am so glad U liked my poem. :)

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  8. @ Aditi- Thanks.. Sure.. Will do. :)

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  9. @ Preetilata【ツ】 -- :):) thanks 4 your compliments... :):)

    Keep visiting.

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  10. @ AD- Am always happy to share... & am so happy to have rejuvenated U.. :)

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  11. @ Lazyking- Thanks 4 the compliments...

    do keep visiting.. :)

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  12. Transports you to another place that's better and has that beautiful girl with the wind in her hair. Brilliant flow and varied degrees of meaning.Bravo!

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  13. Shouldn't it be-
    as dark as the night's sky can "ever" be?
    Nice sweet poem :)

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  14. So...light and refreshing and, uh, PRETTY, really! I loved it! Like a breath of fresh air. =)

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  15. @ anirudh - thanks 4 ur compliments man.. :)

    & yeah I too loved the gal with her hair flying in the pic.

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  16. @ Priya - If I am gonna use "can ever be" then I am referring that the nights sky's best darkness is equal to the darkness of her hair but

    I wanna mean--- her hair is so dark tat even the darkest of the night's skies would not be an equal to it...

    thats why I used "never"

    :)

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  17. Your poem's lovely,ethereal and like an arrow pierces the heart.

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  18. @ Marina- Am glad my poem refreshed U. :)

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  19. @ Shimi - am so very happy-- My poem pierced Ur heart.... :D

    thanks 4 commenting.....

    Do visit again....

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  20. beautiful mate.... take care...

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  21. Oh wow ! beautiful !
    I loved the way you put the dance forms in the lilies...awesome !

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  22. @arv -- thanks 4 the compliments...

    cheers.. :)

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  23. @ Cindrella -- :) I loved all seeing all those dance forms in the reality show -- "So U think U can dance..."

    hmhm... I always wanted to do a bit of ball room dancing...

    & I will sure do the same soon. :)

    cheers..

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  24. @ littleby little, bit by bit--

    thanks. :)

    do drop by 4 more beautifull stuff.. :)

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  25. Every woman should have a beautiful poem written about her like that.

    Beautiful!

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  26. I love the image so very much!


    **Her flowing hair-
    Her beauty's lair;
    As dark as the night's sky can never be-
    As dense as love will ever always be-


    beautifully expressed WOW!

    Keshi.

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  27. hey i have tagged you ... peep into my blog!

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  28. @ jo -- :) Indeed Jo...

    If women are not celebrated, then who are to be celebrated.

    :)


    cheers

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  29. @ sm- thanks 4 your compliments.. :)

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  30. @ Keshi -- I too loved writing those lines....

    And the pic is from pro.corbis.com-
    that web site has a bucket load of great pics & all of the pics I use are always from the same.

    cheers.. :)

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  31. @ pranksygang -- will sure do...

    my net connection @ home is a bit of a problem child. Will sure answer your tag as soon as I get my connection fixed.


    Cheers.. :)

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  32. thats where I get my pics too :)

    Keshi.

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  33. Very very refreshing poem!!

    Cheers

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  34. :) am glad my poem refreshed U.. :)

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  35. lovely
    lovely
    lovely

    i wanna get lost in love too

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  36. @ Chriz- Hey.... I thought, U were lost in love!!!!

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  37. AWESOME, INDEED YOU GAVE NEW VIEW TO FEMININITY,

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  38. @ Usirae

    thanks 4 your comments-

    Do visit again. :)

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